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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
@00:10hihi. no dzieki.
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
@00:14Thank you :)
Your idea seems cute, though, and I know you would make it even more adorable with your animation, it's a shame you didn't animate it, really. Personally, I think that for this competition you should do as much as you can with the entry, and submit even the unfinished piece, maybe it would score higher than you'd expect, and even if not, maybe you would at least get some valuable criticism on what was already done.
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THESICKNESS3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
thank you - :D
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My entry for August 11 Second Club competition ([link]). It ended up on the 9th place out of 166 entries, I think.

Amazingly, nobody complained about the clarity of the premise, some people even seemed to be amused by it, so either nobody got the idea, or it is indeed a huge success...
...of :icondelceta:, whose suggestions dragged this piece out of the dark abyss of obscurity. Thanks.

Done in Toonboom from scratch.
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HappyFoe Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
So freaking nice! :)
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Sreca Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Professional Artist
hey in what program did you make this?
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haffri Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Toonboom. Version 5, I think.
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EggHeadCheesyBird Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010   Digital Artist
You marvel!
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
or am I.
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YuzukiMadoko Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010  Student General Artist
@00:10Kurde swietna animacja! Wez caly film narysuj! xD
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
@00:10hihi. no dzieki.
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bee7890 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Professional Filmographer
@00:14wonderful :) i did character designs for this one but never actually got around to animating it, i couldn't decide what was she was describing >.<

i was thinking an old lady in nursing home making a masterpiece out of her food and the guy dismissing it but i thought it wouldn't read right i find 11 second club so difficult to not do the obvious, you did really well though very clear :)
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
@00:14Thank you :)
Your idea seems cute, though, and I know you would make it even more adorable with your animation, it's a shame you didn't animate it, really. Personally, I think that for this competition you should do as much as you can with the entry, and submit even the unfinished piece, maybe it would score higher than you'd expect, and even if not, maybe you would at least get some valuable criticism on what was already done.
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Delceta Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
@00:14KOOOOOOOOOOOOCHAM TO C:
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
@00:14A... a mnie? D:
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Delceta Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
@00:14nooo... mozeee... jak mnie przekonasz, ze to ma sens...
a tam! nie musisz! KOCHAM CIE!!!!!!! <3
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
@00:14no mysle.
jacietez.
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THESICKNESS3 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@02:06if only it were longer! the characters were really smooth! good work
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@02:06thank you :)
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THESICKNESS3 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
:meow:
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
Wow, I just noticed your signature. Pretty cool, and ending caught me off guard, haha :)
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THESICKNESS3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
thank you - :D
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vomitresponse Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@00:14Aha, Granny is amazed and she doesn't even know why.

I think the animation is superb and the character designs are good.
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14thank you :)
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vomitresponse Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome!
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NightmarexSaga Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
@00:14Wonderful as always. The sync is spot on
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14Thank you :)
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Silk-Ward Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
@00:14very nice~
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14thanks :)
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AmeixKon Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Student Filmographer
@00:14Really awesome job!! Lol I got the joke too so don't worry ^-^

Btw what program do you work in? Or do you work traditionally?
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14Thanks a lot :)
I use Toonboom Studio. I don't work traditionally too much, because I don't have all the equipment at home. I wish I would, though.
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AmeixKon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Student Filmographer
You're welcome!
Lol and thank you!
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JWiesner Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
@00:14Aw man, I just LOVE your animations! :D

The voices fit your drawings and characters perfectly. It has so much personality and also humor just by watching all of it.

I especially like the part where the grandma shakes her head when she goes "Is this what you thought it would be? I certainly didn't."

Great work!
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14Thanks :) Well, actually, it's my least favourite part, because I think I wanted it to look slightly different, but it's nice to know that it looks good anyway.
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Biddiexpress Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010   Filmographer
@00:14YES.

To put it bluntly, in words that is, the lip sync is indeed perfect and animation is overall awesome! :D

One VERY minor thing which makes me feel uncomfortable though is the how the arms support her body at one point, it looks awkward for some reason.

*Re-wathes 10 times, doing all that frame by frame analysing stuff*

Were you trying to get the old woman to sort of lean in closer to the monitor at the "amazing" part? I think that's where it's looking odd to me.
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14it was supposed to be "for", not "wof". weird.

And, I forgot, thanks :)
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haffri Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
@00:14That was actually my favourite part, until you mentioned that and indeed, I can see why it would look awkward, and it does look awkward to me now. I think I originally wanted her to lean on straight arms, you know, like with... enthusiastically... squashed and lifted shoulders... if you know what I mean, but I think it didn't look natural or something else was wrong with that and I changed it wof this version... it was a long time ago, though, and I don't remember, to be honest.
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